Bug 157128 - typos in kpackage documentation
Summary: typos in kpackage documentation
Status: RESOLVED UNMAINTAINED
Alias: None
Product: kpackage
Classification: Miscellaneous
Component: general (show other bugs)
Version: unspecified
Platform: Compiled Sources Linux
: NOR normal
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Documentation Editorial Team
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Reported: 2008-02-02 18:19 UTC by Pierre Buard
Modified: 2009-12-20 14:01 UTC (History)
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Description Pierre Buard 2008-02-02 18:19:22 UTC
Version:            (using Devel)
Installed from:    Compiled sources

This documentation was really in need of corrections. I also added or changed punctuations to make shorter and clearer sentences.

--- kpackage.pot	2008-02-02 17:13:27.000000000 +0100
+++ kpackage.pot	2008-02-02 17:45:27.000000000 +0100
@@ -72 +72 @@
-", Debian and Slackware package managers, it used the <acronym>SMART</acronym> "
+", Debian and Slackware package managers. It uses the <acronym>SMART</acronym> "
@@ -145,3 +145,3 @@
-"When &kpackage; is started normally (that is it has not been invoked via drag "
-"and drop and has not been given any parameters) it displays two panels with the "
-"package tree on the left, this tree shows installed and available packages."
+"When &kpackage; is started normally (that is, it has not been invoked via drag "
+"and drop or given any parameters), it displays two panels. The "
+"one on the left shows a tree listing installed and available packages."
@@ -178,4 +178,3 @@
-"The <guilabel>Search:</guilabel> line filters the package tree so that only "
-"those packages whose name or summary contains the search string are displayed. "
-"The columns that are searched can be changed by a menu that can be brought up "
-"by clicking the &RMB; on the search line."
+"The <guilabel>Search:</guilabel> line filters the package tree to display only "
+"packages whose name or summary are contained in the search string. "
+"The searched columns can be changed in a menu by using the &RMB; on the search line"
@@ -273,2 +272,2 @@
-"<guilabel>Old Version</guilabel> - If the package updates an installed package, "
-"the version of the old package"
+"<guilabel>Old Version</guilabel> - The version of the old package, "
+"if the package has an update available."
@@ -281,2 +280,2 @@
-"The packages have graphical labels to indicate their state, an image "
-"representing the package type means an installed package, a <guilabel>"
+"The packages have graphical labels to indicate their state. An image "
+"representing a open box means an installed package, a <guilabel>"
@@ -284 +283 @@
-"means a package that can upgrade an installed package."
+"means a package that be can upgraded."
@@ -291,3 +290,3 @@
-"A single package is selected by clicking on the name. Clicking on the dot in "
-"the <guilabel>Mark</guilabel> column marks the package with a tick, a second "
-"click unmarks it, while <keycombo action=\"simul\">&Shift;<mousebutton>"
+"A single package is selected by clicking on its name. Clicking on the dot in "
+"the <guilabel>Mark</guilabel> column marks the package with a tick. A second "
+"click unmarks it. <keycombo action=\"simul\">&Shift;<mousebutton>"
@@ -473,2 +472,2 @@
-"The <guilabel>Install</guilabel> dialog lists the packages to be selected to be "
-"installed in a panel in the top left as well the packages needed to satisfy any "
+"The <guilabel>Install</guilabel> dialog lists the packages selected for "
+"installation (in a panel in the top left) as well as the packages needed to satisfy any "
@@ -484,3 +483,3 @@
-"Normally the install window will be deleted after a successful install but if "
-"the <guibutton>Keep this window</guibutton> check box is selected the window "
-"will stay around."
+"Normally the install window is removed after a successful install but if "
+"the <guibutton>Keep this window</guibutton> check box is selected, then "
+"it will stay around."
@@ -494,2 +493,2 @@
-"installation programs are run, for interactive installation programs the "
-"interaction is done in this window."
+"installation programs are run. When a program requires your input, the "
+"interaction will be done in this window."
@@ -509 +508 @@
-"Uninstall</guibutton> button in the right panel, the <guibutton>"
+"Uninstall</guibutton> button in the right panel. Similarly, the <guibutton>"
@@ -511 +510 @@
-"packages. The buttons bring up the <guilabel>Uninstall</guilabel> dialog."
+"packages. Both buttons bring up the <guilabel>Uninstall</guilabel> dialog."
@@ -575,2 +574,2 @@
-"The Search line filters the package tree so that only those packages whose name "
-"or summary contains the search string are displayed."
+"The Search line filters the package tree to display only packages whose name "
+"or summary are contained in the search string."
@@ -642,2 +641,2 @@
-"The <guilabel>Find File</guilabel> dialog searches for files the names of which "
-"contain the search string. The columns in the display are:"
+"The <guilabel>Find File</guilabel> dialog searches for files whose names "
+"are contained in the search string. The columns in the display are:"
@@ -675 +674 @@
-"Also search uninstalled packages</guilabel> is set, this will only work if the "
+"Also search uninstalled packages</guilabel> is set. This will only work if the "
@@ -698 +697 @@
-"access for installing/uninstalling packages, this can be can be done by running "
+"access to install/uninstall packages. This can be can be done by running "
@@ -707,2 +706,2 @@
-"Alternatively, if &kpackage; is running as a normal user it will try to run the "
-"install/uninstall programs as root by logging in to a pseudo terminal, it will "
+"Alternatively, if &kpackage; is running as a normal user, it will try to run the "
+"install/uninstall programs as root by logging in to a pseudo terminal. It will "
@@ -710 +709 @@
-"ssh</command> to do this and if needed it will pop up a prompt window where the "
+"ssh</command> to do this. If needed, it will also pop up a prompt window where the "
@@ -712 +711 @@
-"ssh</command> key can be typed. For this to work the root prompt has to end in "
+"ssh</command> key can be typed. For this to work, the root prompt has to end in "
@@ -929 +928 @@
-"Produces a list of packages that contain the entered file name, selecting a "
+"Produces a list of packages that contains the entered file name. Selecting a "
@@ -931 +930 @@
-"differently for <acronym>RPM</acronym> (where you have to enter the exact file "
+"differently with <acronym>RPM</acronym> (where you have to enter the exact file "
@@ -945,2 +944,2 @@
-"Searching for uninstall files uses the <command>apt-file</command> "
-"command, this updates the database that <command>apt-file</command> uses."
+"Searching for uninstalled files uses the <command>apt-file</command> "
+"command. This updates the database used by <command>apt-file</command>."
@@ -1203 +1202 @@
-"If set the list of files in the package is checked to see if they are actually "
+"If set, the list of files in the package is checked to see if they are actually "
@@ -1376 +1375 @@
-msgid "For installing &kpackage; you need:"
+msgid "To install &kpackage; you need:"
@@ -1395,2 +1394,2 @@
-"For listing Debian packages no other software is needed but to install and "
-"uninstall the packages you need:"
+"No other software is required to list Debian packages but to install and "
+"uninstall them you need:"
@@ -1415 +1414 @@
-"For <acronym>BSD</acronym> packages you need the package management programs:"
+"For <acronym>BSD</acronym> packages, you need the package management programs:"
@@ -1457 +1456 @@
-msgid "For dealing with Redhat packages you need:"
+msgid "To deal with Redhat packages you need:"
Comment 1 Dario Andres 2009-12-20 14:01:03 UTC
KPackage was recently removed from KDE SC (since 4.4 beta2) as it was completely broken and unmaintained.

Most of the common GNU/Linux distributions offer their own tools to deal with packages, and KDE is working on an universal package manager replacement named "Shaman" (to superseed KPackageKit)

Closing the KPackage's bug reports as UNMAINTAINED.

Regards