Bug 128591 - Typos and errors in Internet & Network (KDE User's Guide)
Summary: Typos and errors in Internet & Network (KDE User's Guide)
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: docs.kde.org
Classification: Websites
Component: general (show other bugs)
Version: unspecified
Platform: Debian testing Linux
: NOR normal
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Documentation Editorial Team
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Reported: 2006-06-04 02:02 UTC by Robert Gustavsson
Modified: 2006-11-24 09:37 UTC (History)
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Description Robert Gustavsson 2006-06-04 02:02:54 UTC
Version:            (using KDE KDE 3.5.2)
Installed from:    Debian testing/unstable Packages

http://docs.kde.org/development/en/kdebase/userguide/kcontrol-internet-and-network.html

"File Sharing", I don't have a section in Control Center called that. Maybe it is because of my configuration or maybe it has been removed since the docs were written.

"Local Network Chat" and "Samba Configuration", same comment as above. Maybe add a note for those optional sections that looks kinda like this: "This subsection may or may not be present depending on what packages gas been installed on your computer."

"Preferences", I don't have a section called that. But I do have a section called "Connection Preferences" that contain settings for timeout values. I guess Preferences has been changed to Connection Preferences.

"Webbrowser" should probably be "Web Browser".

/rob
Comment 1 Anne-Marie Mahfouf 2006-11-24 09:28:02 UTC
SVN commit 607338 by annma:

Fixed doc according to 3.5.5 KDE vanilla KControl Center, that means some of your remarks are correct but others do not apply.
Thanks for your report!
CCBUG=128591


 M  +23 -15    control-center.docbook  


--- branches/KDE/3.5/kdebase/doc/userguide/control-center.docbook #607337:607338
@@ -298,6 +298,15 @@
 
 <variablelist>
 <varlistentry>
+<term><guilabel>Connection Preferences</guilabel></term>
+<listitem>
+<para>Here you can set advanced networking options such as timeout values
+for server connects. Usually you would leave these options at the defaults
+unless you really knew what you were doing.</para>
+</listitem>
+</varlistentry>
+
+<varlistentry>
 <term><guilabel>Desktop Sharing</guilabel></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>Desktop Sharing allows you to invite someone to share your session
@@ -352,15 +361,6 @@
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry>
-<term><guilabel>Preferences</guilabel></term>
-<listitem>
-<para>Here you can set advanced networking options such as timeout values
-for server connects. Usually you would leave these options at the defaults
-unless you really knew what you were doing.</para>
-</listitem>
-</varlistentry>
-
-<varlistentry>
 <term><guilabel>Proxy</guilabel></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>This is where you would configure &kde; to connect to a proxy server
@@ -372,11 +372,11 @@
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry>
-<term><guilabel>Samba Configuration</guilabel></term>
+<term><guilabel>Samba</guilabel></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>The Samba Configuration module requires the <systemitem
-						class="username">root</systemitem> or administrator password. It is an
-advanced configuration tool that allows you to control Samba's security,
+<para>The Samba Configuration module requires the
+<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> or administrator password. It is
+an advanced configuration tool that allows you to control Samba's security,
 shares, users and printers in an intuitive graphical interface.  This is a
 very powerful tool with support for configuring everything from simple file
 and printer sharing, to using your Samba server as a &Windows; NT Domain
@@ -385,11 +385,19 @@
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry>
+<term><guilabel>Service Discovery</guilabel></term>
+<listitem>
+<para>You can set up services browsing with ZeroConf. You can for example browse
+your local network using multicast DNS.</para>
+</listitem>
+</varlistentry>
+
+<varlistentry>
 <term><guilabel>Web Browser</guilabel></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>This module is where you would configure options relating to
-&konqueror; as a web-browser. The usual options you would expect from a
-webbrowser, such as cookie configuration, cache and history can be found
+&konqueror; as a web browser. The usual options you would expect from a
+web browser, such as cookie configuration, cache and history can be found
 here as well as sections to modify keyboard shortcuts, plugins and
 fonts.</para>
 </listitem>
Comment 2 Anne-Marie Mahfouf 2006-11-24 09:37:30 UTC
SVN commit 607339 by annma:

forward port of 607338
BUG=128591


 M  +23 -15    control-center.docbook  


--- trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/userguide/control-center.docbook #607338:607339
@@ -298,6 +298,15 @@
 
 <variablelist>
 <varlistentry>
+<term><guilabel>Connection Preferences</guilabel></term>
+<listitem>
+<para>Here you can set advanced networking options such as timeout values
+for server connects. Usually you would leave these options at the defaults
+unless you really knew what you were doing.</para>
+</listitem>
+</varlistentry>
+
+<varlistentry>
 <term><guilabel>Desktop Sharing</guilabel></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>Desktop Sharing allows you to invite someone to share your session
@@ -352,15 +361,6 @@
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry>
-<term><guilabel>Preferences</guilabel></term>
-<listitem>
-<para>Here you can set advanced networking options such as timeout values
-for server connects. Usually you would leave these options at the defaults
-unless you really knew what you were doing.</para>
-</listitem>
-</varlistentry>
-
-<varlistentry>
 <term><guilabel>Proxy</guilabel></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>This is where you would configure &kde; to connect to a proxy server
@@ -372,11 +372,11 @@
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry>
-<term><guilabel>Samba Configuration</guilabel></term>
+<term><guilabel>Samba</guilabel></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>The Samba Configuration module requires the <systemitem
-						class="username">root</systemitem> or administrator password. It is an
-advanced configuration tool that allows you to control Samba's security,
+<para>The Samba Configuration module requires the
+<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> or administrator password. It is
+an advanced configuration tool that allows you to control Samba's security,
 shares, users and printers in an intuitive graphical interface.  This is a
 very powerful tool with support for configuring everything from simple file
 and printer sharing, to using your Samba server as a &Windows; NT Domain
@@ -385,11 +385,19 @@
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry>
+<term><guilabel>Service Discovery</guilabel></term>
+<listitem>
+<para>You can set up services browsing with ZeroConf. You can for example browse
+your local network using multicast DNS.</para>
+</listitem>
+</varlistentry>
+
+<varlistentry>
 <term><guilabel>Web Browser</guilabel></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>This module is where you would configure options relating to
-&konqueror; as a web-browser. The usual options you would expect from a
-webbrowser, such as cookie configuration, cache and history can be found
+&konqueror; as a web browser. The usual options you would expect from a
+web browser, such as cookie configuration, cache and history can be found
 here as well as sections to modify keyboard shortcuts, plugins and
 fonts.</para>
 </listitem>