Bug 120148 - Typos in documentation: kcontrol_kcmaccess
Summary: Typos in documentation: kcontrol_kcmaccess
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: docs.kde.org
Classification: Websites
Component: Corrections (show other bugs)
Version: unspecified
Platform: Compiled Sources Linux
: NOR normal
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Documentation Editorial Team
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Reported: 2006-01-15 03:19 UTC by Sander Koning
Modified: 2006-05-22 19:41 UTC (History)
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Description Sander Koning 2006-01-15 03:19:46 UTC
Version:            (using KDE Devel)
Installed from:    Compiled sources

No real typo this time, but a style question:
In index.docbook:101, 124, 136, 164, "the user" is used whereas the rest of the documentation refers to "you". I'd like to see this changed to have "you" consistently over KDE.
Comment 1 Malcolm Hunter 2006-01-16 00:44:47 UTC
SVN commit 498709 by mhunter:

Fix consistency: the user -> you
CCBUG=120148

 M  +15 -15    index.docbook  


--- trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/kcontrol/kcmaccess/index.docbook #498708:498709
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
 <term><guilabel>Use Sticky Keys</guilabel></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>
-If this option is enabled, the user can press and release the &Shift;,
+If this option is enabled, you can press and release the &Shift;,
 &Alt; or &Ctrl; keys, and then press another key to get a key combo
 (example: <keycombo action="simul">&Ctrl; &Alt;
 <keycap>Del</keycap></keycombo> could be done with &Ctrl; then &Alt;
@@ -110,8 +110,8 @@
 <para>
 Also in this section is a check box labeled <guilabel>Lock Sticky
 Keys</guilabel>.  If this check box is enabled, the &Alt;, &Ctrl;
-and &Shift; keys stay <quote>selected</quote> until they are
-<quote>de-selected</quote> by the user.
+and &Shift; keys stay <quote>selected</quote> until you
+<quote>de-selected</quote> them.
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -121,10 +121,10 @@
 <varlistentry>
 <term>With <guilabel>Lock Sticky Keys</guilabel> disabled:</term>
 <listitem>
-<para>The user presses the &Shift; key, then presses the
-<keycap>F</keycap> key.  The computer translates this into <keycombo
-action="simul">&Shift;<keycap>F</keycap></keycombo>.  Now if the user
-types a <keycap>p</keycap>, the computer interprets this as the letter p
+<para>If you press the &Shift; key then press the
+<keycap>F</keycap> key, the computer interprets this as <keycombo
+action="simul">&Shift;<keycap>F</keycap></keycombo>.  Now if you
+type a <keycap>p</keycap>, the computer interprets this as the letter p
 (no shift).
 </para>
 </listitem>
@@ -134,10 +134,10 @@
 <term>With <guilabel>Lock Sticky Keys</guilabel> enabled:</term>
 <listitem>
 <para>
-The user presses the &Shift; key <emphasis>twice</emphasis>, then presses the <keycap>F</keycap> key.
-The computer translates this into <keycombo
-action="simul">&Shift;<keycap>F</keycap></keycombo>.  Now if the user
-types a <keycap>p</keycap>, the computer interprets this as the letter P
+If you press the &Shift; key <emphasis>twice</emphasis> then press the <keycap>F</keycap> key,
+the computer interprets this as <keycombo
+action="simul">&Shift;<keycap>F</keycap></keycombo>.  Now if you
+type a <keycap>p</keycap>, the computer interprets this as the letter P
 (<keycombo action="simul">&Shift;<keycap>P</keycap></keycombo>). To
 de-select the &Shift; key, press it again.
 </para>
@@ -151,8 +151,8 @@
 <term><guilabel>Slow keys</guilabel></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>
-If this option is enabled, the user must hold the key down for a
-specified period of time (adjustable with the slider) before the
+If this option is enabled, you must hold the key down for a
+specified length of time (adjustable with the slider) before the
 keystroke will be accepted. This helps prevent accidental key strokes.
 </para>
 </listitem>
@@ -162,9 +162,9 @@
 <term><guilabel>Bounce keys</guilabel></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>
-If this option is enabled, the user must wait a specified delay
+If this option is enabled, you must wait for a specified length of time
 (configurable with the slider) before the next key press can be
-accepted.  This prevents accidental multiple key strokes.
+accepted. This prevents accidental multiple key strokes.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
Comment 2 Chris Howells 2006-05-22 19:41:00 UTC
looks like malcolm fixed this bug but didn't close the bug report.