Bug 99656

Summary:	Problems with the kdf handbook
Product:	[Websites] docs.kde.org	Reporter:	Brian Beck <brian.beck>
Component:	general	Assignee:	Documentation Editorial Team <kde-doc-english>
Status:	RESOLVED FIXED
Severity:	normal
Priority:	NOR
Version:	0.5
Target Milestone:	---
Platform:	Debian testing
OS:	Linux
Latest Commit:		Version Fixed In:
Sentry Crash Report:
Attachments:	Replacement screenshot Replacement screenshot

Description Brian Beck 2005-02-18 02:24:31 UTC

Version:           0.5 (using KDE KDE 3.3.2)
Installed from:    Debian testing/unstable Packages
Compiler:          gcc (GCC) 3.3.5 (Debian 1:3.3.5-8) 
OS:                Linux

I've noticed some *very small* problems with the kdf handbook Revision 0. (2003-09-16).  If I simply have an old version of the handbook, and the problems have been fixed I apologize for taking your time.

Thank you.


* The two screenshots do not follow guidelines (http://i18n.kde.org/doc/screenshots.php)



* In the "The Settings menu and dialog" on "The KDiskFree menu bar" page you need something like this...
Setting->Configure Shortcuts...
    The standard KDE dialog for setting shortcut keys



* The line...
Settings->Configure KDiskFree

ought to read...
Settings->Configure KDiskFree...

Comment 1 Brian Beck 2005-02-18 02:29:39 UTC

Created attachment 9690 [details]
Replacement screenshot

This screenshot replaces the kdf.png screenshot used on "The Main window" page.
 If you decide to use it the following sentence...

In the picture above, three devices are shown: two ext2-formatted hard drive
partitions, one mounted at the filesystem root (/) and one at /home, and a
mounted CD-ROM.

ought to read...

In the picture above, four devices are shown: one reiserfs-formatted hard drive
partition mounted at the filesystem root (/), two CD-ROMs, and a floppy drive.

Comment 2 Brian Beck 2005-02-18 02:30:58 UTC

Created attachment 9691 [details]
Replacement screenshot

This screenshot replaces the kdf_config.png screenshot.

Comment 3 Lauri Watts 2005-05-08 19:06:45 UTC

SVN commit 411051 by lauri:

New images from Brian Beck, and some reworking of the text to suit

BUG:99656



 M  +14 -5     trunk/KDE/kdeutils/doc/kdf/index.docbook  
 M             trunk/KDE/kdeutils/doc/kdf/kdf.png  
 M             trunk/KDE/kdeutils/doc/kdf/kdf_config.png  


--- trunk/KDE/kdeutils/doc/kdf/index.docbook #411050:411051
@@ -110,10 +110,9 @@
 graph.</para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
 
-<para>In the picture above, three devices are shown: two ext2-formatted
-hard drive partitions, one mounted at the filesystem root (<filename
-class="directory">/</filename>) and one at <filename
-class="directory">/home</filename>, and a mounted &CD-ROM;.</para>
+<para>In the picture above, four devices are shown: one reiserfs-formatted
+hard drive partition mounted at the filesystem root (<filename
+class="directory">/</filename>), two &CD-ROM;'s, and a floppy drive.</para>
 
 <para><mousebutton>Left</mousebutton> clicking on the header of a
 particular column sorts the devices according to that variable. A
@@ -167,9 +166,19 @@
 <variablelist>
 <varlistentry>
 <term>
+<menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu>
+<guimenuitem>Configure Shortcuts...</guimenuitem></menuchoice>
+</term>
+<listitem>
+<para>The standard &kde; dialog for setting shortcuts.</para>
+</listitem>
+</varlistentry>
+
+<varlistentry>
+<term>
 <menuchoice>
 <guimenu>Settings</guimenu>
-<guimenuitem>Configure KDiskFree</guimenuitem>
+<guimenuitem>Configure KDiskFree...</guimenuitem>
 </menuchoice>
 </term>
 <listitem><para><action>Opens a configuration dialog.</action></para>