Bug 105193

Created attachment 10971 [details]
found more typos + missing menu entries, updated commands.docbook

Created attachment 11046 [details]
updated docbooks

found some more errors in docbooks

SVN commit 449783 by lauri:

Update from Burkhard Lück
BUG:105193


 M  +4 -4      configuration.docbook  
 M  +2 -2      dcop.docbook  
 M  +1 -1      using.docbook  


--- branches/KDE/3.5/kdeedu/doc/kmplot/configuration.docbook #449782:449783
@@ -2,19 +2,19 @@
 <title>Configuring &kmplot;</title> 
 <para>To access the &kmplot; configuration
 dialog, select <menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Configure
-KmPlot...</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. A number of settings can also be changed
+&kmplot;...</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. A number of settings can also be changed
 from options in the <guimenu>Edit</guimenu> menu, as well. </para>
 
 <note>
 <para>Settings changed in the &kmplot; configuration dialog become the
 default for &kmplot;, and only take effect when a new plot is started. Settings
-changed in the <guimenu>View</guimenu> menu take effect immediately, but do not
+changed in the <guimenu>Edit</guimenu> menu take effect immediately, but do not
 persist after &kmplot; is exited.</para>
 </note>
 
 <sect1 id="general-config">
 <title><guilabel>General</guilabel> Configuration</title>
-<para>Here you can set global settings which automatic will be saved when you exit &kmplot;. In the first tab you can set calculation-precision, angle-mode (radians and degrees), background color and zoom in and zoom out factors. </para><para>The second tab let you define you own constants.  &kmplot; saves the constains in the same file as KCalc does. That means you can create a constant in  &kmplot;, close the program and load it in KCalc and vice versa.  &kmplot; only supports constant names that consist one capital character and if you in KCalc define a constant name that is not one character, the name will be truncated. E.g, if you already have the constants "apple" and "bananas" in KCalc, they will be renamed to "A" and "B" in &kmplot;.</para>
+<para>Here you can set global settings which automatic will be saved when you exit &kmplot;. In the first tab you can set calculation-precision, angle-mode (radians and degrees), background color and zoom in and zoom out factors. </para><para>The second tab let you define you own constants.  &kmplot; saves the constans in the same file as KCalc does. That means you can create a constant in  &kmplot;, close the program and load it in KCalc and vice versa.  &kmplot; only supports constant names that consist of one capital character and if you in KCalc define a constant name that is not one character, the name will be truncated. E.g, if you already have the constants "apple" and "bananas" in KCalc, they will be renamed to "A" and "B" in &kmplot;.</para>
 
 <screenshot>
 <screeninfo>Here is a screenshot of the &kmplot; welcome window</screeninfo>
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 configuration option, you can change the colors of the axes and grid of the
 main &kmplot; area.</para>
 <para>In the <guilabel>Functions</guilabel> tab, you can change the colors used
-for the graphs of the ten functions allowed in &kmplot;.</para>
+for the graphs of the functions allowed in &kmplot;.</para>
 </sect1>
 
 <sect1 id="coords-config">
--- branches/KDE/3.5/kdeedu/doc/kmplot/dcop.docbook #449782:449783
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 <chapter id="dcop">
 	<title>Scripting &kmplot;</title>
 	
-	<para>A new feature in KDE 3.4 is that you can write scrips for Kmplot with DCOP. For example, if you want to define a new function <userinput>f(x)=2sin x+3cos x</userinput>, set its line width to 20 and then draw it, you type in a console:</para>
+	<para>A new feature in KDE 3.4 is that you can write scrips for &kmplot; with DCOP. For example, if you want to define a new function <userinput>f(x)=2sin x+3cos x</userinput>, set its line width to 20 and then draw it, you type in a console:</para>
 	<para><command>dcop kmplot-PID Parser addFunction "f(x)=2sin x+3cos x"</command>
-		As a result, the new function's id number will be returned, or -1 if the function could't be defined.</para>
+		As a result, the new function's id number will be returned, or -1 if the function could not be defined.</para>
 	<para><command>>dcop kmplot-PID Parser setFunctionFLineWidth 20 ID</command>
 		This command sets the function with the id number ID the line width to 20.</para>
 	<para><command>>dcop kmplot-PID View drawPlot</command>
--- branches/KDE/3.5/kdeedu/doc/kmplot/using.docbook #449782:449783
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
 function, but prefix the name of the function describing the x-coordinate with
 the letter x, and the function describing the y-coordinate with the letter
 y. As with explicit functions, you may use any variable name you wish for the
-parameter. To draw a parametric function, you must go to <guimenu>Functions</guimenu><guimenuitem>New Parametric Plot...</guimenuitem>. A function name will be created automatic if you do not specify one.</para>
+parameter. To draw a parametric function, you must go to <guimenu>Plot</guimenu><guimenuitem>New Parametric Plot...</guimenuitem>. A function name will be created automatic if you do not specify one.</para>
 <para>As an example, suppose you want to draw a circle, which has parametric
 equations x=sin(t), y=cos(t). In the &kmplot; functions dialog, do the
 following:

some of the above reported errors are still not fixed:

index.docbook:10 <!ENTITY menu SYSTEM "menu.docbook"> 
remove this line, the entity is never referenced 
 
remove the file menu.docbook, it is no longer in use 
remove l10n/templates/docmessages/kdeedu/kmplot_menu.pot, obsolete file

introduction.docbook:25 typo 
<para>&kmplot; also provides some numerical an visual features like: 
change to "an" to "and"

still many errors (typos + missing menu entries) in commands.docbook, 
fixed version is my attachment (id=10971)

SVN commit 489592 by lueck:

documentation update (menus, checked guiitems, sanitized) 
BUG:105193 
CCMAIL:peter.hedlund@kdemail.net 
CCMAIL:f_edemar@linux.se 
CCMAIL:annma.kde.org


 M  +133 -49   kmplot/commands.docbook  
 M  +50 -27    kmplot/configuration.docbook  
 M  +4 -4      kmplot/credits.docbook  
 M  +3 -3      kmplot/dcop.docbook  
 M  +1 -2      kmplot/developer.docbook  
 M  +2 -2      kmplot/firststeps.docbook  
 M  +5 -8      kmplot/index.docbook  
 M  +1 -1      kmplot/introduction.docbook  
 M  +4 -4      kmplot/man-kmplot.1.docbook  
 D             kmplot/menu.docbook  
 M  +2 -2      kmplot/reference.docbook  
 M  +32 -16    kmplot/using.docbook  
 M  +1 -1      kturtle/getting-started.docbook  
 M  +5 -5      kturtle/index.docbook  
 M  +33 -30    kturtle/using-kturtle.docbook  
 M  +50 -33    kwordquiz/index.docbook