Bug 103427

Summary: typo: Bugs in KControl documentation (kcontrol, _background, _cookies)
Product: [Websites] docs.kde.org Reporter: Sander Koning <sanderkoning>
Component: CorrectionsAssignee: Documentation Editorial Team <kde-doc-english>
Status: RESOLVED FIXED    
Severity: normal    
Priority: NOR    
Version: unspecified   
Target Milestone: ---   
Platform: unspecified   
OS: Linux   
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Description Sander Koning 2005-04-07 15:37:36 UTC
Version:            (using KDE KDE 3.4.0)
Installed from:    Unlisted Binary Package

Hi,

Found the following bugs in the documentation for KControl...


kcontrol.po
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index.docbook:71
"The" should not be capitalised.

index.docbook:82
"3 ways" should read "in 3 ways".

index.docbook:259
"File" should read "Settings".
"Configure Shortcuts." should read "Configure Shortcuts...".
"</menuchoice> From" should read "</menuchoice>. From".

index.docbook:279
"one of three ways" should read "in one of three ways".

index.docbook:310
"availible" should read "available".


kcontrol_background.po
----------------------
index.docbook:262
"Adding, Removing and Modifying Patterns" is called "Adding, Removing and Modifying Wallpapers and Patterns" in the section itself.

index.docbook:319
"(&eg; <application>XEarth</application>" misses a closing parenthesis.

index.docbook:337
"a default calculated based on the current font" is a little 'shaky'.

index.docbook:363, 371
No period at end of sentence.


kcontrol_cookies
----------------
index.docbook:86
"Disabling this option" should really be "Enabling this option".
Comment 1 Lauri Watts 2005-04-07 18:41:17 UTC
CVS commit by lauri: 

BUG:103427


  M +2 -2      index.docbook   1.59
  M +3 -3      background/index.docbook   1.14
  M +1 -1      cookies/index.docbook   1.9


--- kdebase/doc/kcontrol/index.docbook  #1.58:1.59
@@ -259,5 +259,5 @@
 <para>
  The <guimenu>Settings</guimenu> menu has a single entry,
-<menuchoice><guimenu>File</guimenu><guimenuitem>Configure Shortcuts. </guimenuitem></menuchoice> From here you can map keyboard shortcuts to the 
+<menuchoice><guimenu>File</guimenu><guimenuitem>Configure Shortcuts...</guimenuitem></menuchoice> From here you can map keyboard shortcuts to the 
 other menu options.
 </para>
@@ -309,5 +309,5 @@
 
 <para>
-You can run individual modules without running kcontrol using the command <command>kcmshell</command> from &konsole;. Type <userinput> <command>kcmshell</command><option> --list</option></userinput> to see a list of the availible &kcontrolcenter; modules. You can also access individual &kcontrol; modules through adding the <guilabel>Preferences</guilabel> button to either &kicker; or the &kmenu; through their respective configuration dialogs.
+You can run individual modules without running kcontrol using the command <command>kcmshell</command> from &konsole;. Type <userinput> <command>kcmshell</command><option> --list</option></userinput> to see a list of the available &kcontrolcenter; modules. You can also access individual &kcontrol; modules through adding the <guilabel>Preferences</guilabel> button to either &kicker; or the &kmenu; through their respective configuration dialogs.
 </para>
 

--- kdebase/doc/kcontrol/background/index.docbook  #1.13:1.14
@@ -318,5 +318,5 @@
 
 <para>To add a third party application (&eg;
-<application>XEarth</application> you may use the
+<application>XEarth</application>) you may use the
 <guibutton>Add...</guibutton> button.  A dialog will open allowing you
 to choose your application, and fill in other data about it.  You may
@@ -363,5 +363,5 @@
 <para>To add a new pattern that is available to every user on your
 computer, simply place the file in <filename
-class="directory">$<envar>KDEDIR</envar>/share/apps/kdesktop/patterns/</filename></para>
+class="directory">$<envar>KDEDIR</envar>/share/apps/kdesktop/patterns/</filename>.</para>
 
 <para>Copy a <literal role="extension">.desktop</literal> file from
@@ -371,5 +371,5 @@
 <para>To add a new pattern for a single user, add the files to
 <filename
-class="directory">$<envar>KDEHOME</envar>/share/apps/kdesktop/patterns/</filename></para>
+class="directory">$<envar>KDEHOME</envar>/share/apps/kdesktop/patterns/</filename>.</para>
 
 <para>For best results, the pattern should be a grayscale PNG file.</para>

--- kdebase/doc/kcontrol/cookies/index.docbook  #1.8:1.9
@@ -84,5 +84,5 @@
 advertisements may try to set a cookie which would allow them to
 track the pages you view across multiple web sites.</para>
-<para>Disabling this option will mean only cookies that come from the
+<para>Enabling this option will mean only cookies that come from the
 same web server as you are explicitly connecting to will be
 accepted.</para>
Comment 2 Sander Koning 2005-04-07 19:14:09 UTC
Thanks for fixing... but why only one from index.docbook:259?
(Left out of the fix:
"File" should read "Settings". 
"</menuchoice> From" should read "</menuchoice>. From".)
Comment 3 Lauri Watts 2005-05-07 21:21:53 UTC
SVN commit 410388 by lauri:

Fix various bugs and typos in the kcontrol docs

BUG:104287
BUG:104312
BUG:103553
BUG:103500
BUG:103427



 M  +3 -1      trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/kcontrol/background/index.docbook  
 M  +10 -8     trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/kcontrol/filemanager/index.docbook  
 M  +13 -8     trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/kcontrol/fonts/index.docbook  
 M  +3 -3      trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/kcontrol/helpindex/index.docbook  
 M  +12 -5     trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/kcontrol/icons/index.docbook  
 M  +3 -4      trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/kcontrol/index.docbook  
 M  +8 -8      trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/kcontrol/kcmnotify/index.docbook  
 M  +13 -7     trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/kcontrol/kcmsmserver/index.docbook